2024新高考一卷英语读后续写

2024年新高考一卷英语的读后续写题目及参考解析如下：

一、题目原文

I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.

That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.

Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realized that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."

注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右。

二、试题分析

1. 文本信息

   • 人物关系：陌生人之间的临时交往。
   • 体裁：记叙文。
   • 题材：出行赶车的日常生活情境。
   • 文章字数：原文约350个单词（包含续写段首句）。
   • 大意：作者赶着去坐大巴参加一个会议，花了很长时间打车去大巴地点，终于抵达后发现钱包里没现金，无法支付给出租车司机。作者去提款机那里取钱，但是机器出故障了。

2. 解题思路

   • 记叙文要素
     • 时间（when）：九月的一个寒冷且下着雨的傍晚。
     • 地点（where）：维也纳机场，公交车站。
     • 人物（who）：“我”（叙述者），Gunter。
     • 原因（why）：“我”需要赶上去布拉格的最后一班公交车，以便参加会议，但支付车费遇到了麻烦。
   • 故事发展线
     • Introduction：我计划前往布拉格参加会议，但航班延误使得我时间紧迫。
     • Incident：我匆忙坐上Gunter的出租车。
     • Rising Action：我没能准确说出要去的公交车站，Gunter帮助我解决了。
     • Climax：Gunter带我及时赶到了公交车站，但我在支付车费时遇到了麻烦。
     • Solution&Conclusion：待续。
   • 情感发展线
     • 主人公“我”：紧张焦虑（下飞机时）→无助焦虑（说不清公交车站）→感激（到达车站）→着急（无法支付车费）。
     • 司机Gunter：困惑（我说不清公交车站）→积极（联系朋友）。
   • 人物特征
     • Gunter：积极耐心、乐于助人。
     • “我”：急急忙忙。
   • 文章主题：陌生人之间善意的传递以及信任的重要性。

三、续写构思

续写第一段首句：“I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.”（我跑回到Gunter跟前，告诉了他这个坏消息。） 针对第一段续写情节可以提出以下问题：

* Gunter听到这个坏消息的反应是怎么样的？ * 没法支付车费的问题怎么解决呢？ * Gunter如何看待解决的方法呢？

根据“解决问题原则”和续写第二段首句“Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.”（四天后，当我回到维也纳，正如承诺的那样我打了电话给Gunter）可知续写第一段的情节：

* Gunter不知所措。 * 我对Gunter许下承诺某天某地支付打车费。 * Gunter欣然同意我的承诺，我及时赶上班车。结局是我按约支付了车费。

再结合续写第二段首句，针对第二段续写情节可以提出以下问题：

* 我打电话给他之后做了什么？ * Gunter是什么样的回应？

可能的情节包括：

* 我和Gunter见面表达感谢和报答。 * Gunter拒绝我的报答，我们成了朋友。 * 体现“陌生人善意”的主题升华。

四、参考范文

以下是一篇针对该读后续写的参考范文：

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Giving him another apologetic smile, I asked him for a delay in payment and promised to call him and pay him back the money I owed him. To my surprise, Gunter wrote down his phone number without hesitation and said, "Don't worry, we all have unexpected moments. Just pay me back when you can." With a heavy heart but a sense of relief, I thanked him profusely and rushed to catch my bus.

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. We arranged to meet at a nearby café. Over a cup of coffee, I handed him the exact amount of money I owed him, along with a small gift as a token of my gratitude. Gunter refused the gift at first, but after a brief persuasion, he accepted it with a smile, saying, "Your kindness is more than enough payment for me." Our encounter had turned into a friendship, a testament to the goodness that exists between strangers.

这篇范文紧密围绕题目要求，合理展开了故事情节，并充分展现了人物性格和主题思想。